Very nice chapter!! 👀 I'm very curious about the tunnels!
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so that's how you used revenant's class title! she survived going into the rift! that's pretty cool (but also pretty traumatizing)
ohhhh boy looks like there's a team heading into the rift! this should be fun
great chapter!
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Oooh, a nice view of the more techy side of the characters. Fun! I'm looking forward to seeing more about them bc 👀 cool interactions.
Enten!!!! Beautiful.
Also the Rift 👀👀👀👀 mysterious huh
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eNTEN eNTEN-
OWO
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ooooh i love the character interactions!! also !!! enten y e s
great chapter!
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Like everyone said, amazing chapter!!
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👀👀 fantastic chapter!!
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Bro,,,.,., This writing is sexy...
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Plot, character interactions, world-building, and Hercules being a beautiful idiot. I love it!
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thanks everyone!!
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awesome chapter aaa
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Nice! Knew I'd miss this by hours one of these days xD
-Galaxian-
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Great chapter! Roswell can suck a pretzel stick
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jump down the deep end of the rift and go diving in with a parachute, honestly though this was a great chapter
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posted this on my homethread but i'll add it here: the Rift is being discontinued as a forumfic and I am using this concept elsewhere. i will not be using the exact versions of anyone else's characters without express permission, but i may keep some concepts, and if you have any questions or concerns about anything surrounding this, you can reply to this thread or my homethread or pm me, etc. this was really fun! and i'm sad to not be writing it in the same way, but ultimately i cannot write a forumfic and revamp the project at the same time.
thank you to everyone who read, commented, submitted characters, and engaged in any way with the Rift. You all were my lifeblood while I was writing it, and I couldn't have done it without you.
Last edited by xenon (4/23/2021 5:11 pm)